My Cloud Dancers

Well i am getting flustrated at myself, I find it hard to sit and write on a long story because I tend to forget where I was or where I was going so I am starting to write the Cloud Dancers in smaller segments then I will pull them together and add fillers to create the books. It is the only way I can keep my focus at the moment. The heat is starting to get to me, it is making me tired all the time, i spend more hours than I am use to sleeping. I think I will starting putting pieces of the Cloud Dancers on here to see what people think.

I thought I was almost finished

The first book of my Pillar series was coming along beautifully and people were loving reading it, however my eleven year old pointed out to me, mother only two days by coach to get from the main city to the outlaying cities that is a small place. I looked at him and pondered it for awhile and sighed, he is right, so I have to go back and add more travel time in them even if it is several days with out incident. However I think it will be ready to go soon, and I have already started on three of the others series with crosses from Balance.

The premise is thirteen pillars make up the world, the main Pillar is Balance, she regulates the others to always keep the world in Balance. Then we have the Pillars laid out such.

Life and Death
Order and Chaos
War and Peace
Shadow and Light
Suffering and Tranquility
Fire and ice

I have played around with the pillars quite a bit, I think I finally have them laid out as I would like them to be. Suffering and Tranquility still bother me, I am hopeful as i write them I might fine either different words for them or a different combination there. Also I like fire but Ice does not seem to fit, at the moment, I hate when I get almost done and start looking back and wanting to change things around.